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Blackberries

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Mother, take me home
to seas of green
and grass up to my knees

To the songs
that the winds
sing so sweetly

To the towering trees
far in the distance
yet not unreachable

To the long nights
spent on picnic blankets
gazing at the moon
smiling down at us

Mother, take me home
to blackberry bushes
and their fruits

That stain my lips
and dribble down my chin...

That explode in my grasp
and run down my fingertips
as lovely as the blood within my veins
I bet you can guess what my favorite fruit is.




Please feel free to tell me what I could do better next time.

Make it constructive please. c:

I haven't shared my written work in awhile.
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reclusive-aesthetic's avatar
Fantastic. Nothing like the enjoyment of nature.